February 24, 2009

Dawn Color (Sestina)

I walked the edge of the newborn dawn
That wakened the world with fire
And I stood on the brink of the setting sun
In front of the world’s desire
And I realized that this is a world of blood
Because red is the only color.

And I realized that red is the only Color
In torches of silence at Dawn
In cardinal sunsets and roses of Blood
And wine-kissed lips in the Fire
In the sacrifice and the one Desire
When the eyes of the dragon burn like the Sun.

The morning is washed with the bleeding Sun
Because red is the only Color
In the burning gold of death’s Desire
And the blazing passion of Dawn
And the crimson jewels of the frozen Fire
Drenched in a poppies’ Blood.

The streets that ran red with the lover’s Blood
The sacrifice of the Sun
Because of the Tree of eternal Fire
Because red is the only Color
The ultimate Lie on the ultimate Dawn
And the apple of all Desire.

The ones who were caught in the one Desire
Were slain in the City of Blood
For the thing that brings the wind of Dawn
Is known as the Setting Sun
And they realized that red is the only Color
When they turned to face the Fire.

The sky sank into a lake of Fire
Burning in tears of Desire
And I realized that red is the only Color
And the world is made of Blood
And I turned my back on the setting Sun
And went out to look for Dawn.

But the Sun went free, and the Fire sang
And the Blood of the starlight was washed in the rain
And the Cursed Color of all Desire fled from the dying Dawn.

9 comments:

  1. Hello Raora!
    So glad you've another post (it's more than I can say)! I am really very impressed with that poetry. Even if it doesn't rhyme, I loved just sitting and reading the lines and taking in all the brilliancy of the colors, especially with those words sun, dawn, desire, fire, color, blood, and also red... it really was all of those things when I read it, like a flash of images. So keep it up! I'd love to hear it again, only in "blue"-- like sky, rain, thought, sea, moon, and shimmer... but maybe I'll have to write that myself. :) Or perhaps we could help each other?!
    ~Meg

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  2. Hey, I thought it was great! Very pretty indeed...

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  3. I love your poem! I have to write a poem for my English class this week. Yikes! I am very bad at writing poetry. Maybe you can give me some hints:)

    ~Faith B

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  4. your poem is really pretty,i really love the way it has the red color in it,you did a really good job.

    hailey elliott

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  5. Hailey Elliott,

    I am so glad you liked my poem! Thank you for commenting!

    Namarie,
    Raora

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  6. Hey, I loved this poem sounds very good. Where did you get the idea?

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  7. Anonymous,

    Thanks for commenting. So glad you enjoyed it. As for where I got the idea - well, the structure is simply a normal sestina, as I mentioned earlier, but I'm not sure where I got the substance of the poem itself. I wrote with a red color theme and those are really just the ideas that came to me.

    Namarie,
    Raora

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  8. Are you the Dawn Sestina who lived in Williamsport and attended Lycoming College"

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